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Into darkness (warm up)
Into darkness (“warm up”)
Cary was walking around a path during the day.  He was not doing anything specific today but did not want to stay at home.  
After a while of walking, he sat down near a cave to rest for a bit, as it was hot out, and he had been in the sunlight for a while.  
As he stayed in the shade for a while, he ended up dropping his phone down on the ground and fuddled around for it.  He did not find it right away so he took out a flashlight he carried around incase he got stuck at night and turned it on.
A bight light then filled the cave coming from his flashlight, temporally causing him to cover his eyes.  During this time, he heard a series of screeches.
He then uncovered his eyes and saw a fury of movement, hundreds of small pokemon had been dislodged and irritated by the light.  Pokemon were relatively rare in this region, so he was not prepared for this.
Many of the angry pokemon flew towards him, and he dropped his flashl
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IT'S A TRAP (male reader) :iconbenthevaporeon:BenTheVaporeon 15 9
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it's a trap (female reader) :iconbenthevaporeon:BenTheVaporeon 10 0
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second person request story
(Second person TF)
You are walking around in the woods, the trees are thick so you can’t see that far in front of you.   You stumble through some bushes and see a strange array of items set up on the ground.
Right then, you see a man with a riolu there working with something.  You don’t have any time to guess what he was doing before he notices you.  
You quickly try and run back as he gets up and approaches you, but it’s hard to run so close to the trees.  He then takes out some strange glass object and throws it towards you.
The object then shatters on the ground near your feet, and seems to disappear, leaving no shards.
You then see a bunch of strange gray spirals around you, they appear flat, but some of the rotate to show every angle.
Your throat then burns as you inhale one of the spirals, and this makes you a bit dizzy.  Nothing else seems to happen to your lungs, but you then feel a burring from your legs, and look down at them.
You ar
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Scaling the Learning Curve (rapid verson)
Scaling the Learning Curve  
Sam sighed as he walked towards the public library.  He really needed to find a job soon before winter came.  The region he lived in had a very mild climate, and was warm most of the year.  Despite this, during the coldest months of the year, it was far too cold to live in a tent like he normally did.   Sam was not what most would contester a stereotypical homeless person.   He traveled around most of the year and helped with projects around the region.  It was not the worst life, but it had always been hard for him to find a permeant job within this society.  
He was about 19 years old, he never went to college, and did not have any major skills.  Because of this, he never could keep a long term job in a fixed place.  Many low skill jobs had been replaced by machines, and the rest were usually given to people with slight physical or mental disabilities.   But right now, he needed a permeant place to st
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TF infection story 3 (draft)
{Uncertainty and fear rule this world}.  At least that was what Ben thought after the past series of events.  He had a condition well the cells of a pokemon or animal took root in your body and grew.  This condition was not a cancer were rouge cells grew and overtook your body.  Tumors grew and grew, leaving useless cells to grow until they killed the host, but this was different. The new cells grew like tumors at first but then seemed to disperse and spread throughout the body.  They then formed themselves into fully functional but inhuman organs and features, features that somehow looked identical to the person’s immune system.  What caused this condition was not known, and there was little way to tell what they ultimately would do to a person.  As far as Ben knew, pokemon growths had never killed a human yet, but short of that they could do about anything.  He had been infected with cells from a rare vaporeon breed, and so far they had e
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TF infection story part 2 (draft)
The past day had been long, even if Ben really did not do anything during the time.  He had developed a contagious condition were a vaporeons cells grew inside of him and changed features.  The condition was not restricted to vaporeon, or even to pokemon.  As far as he knew someone infected by him would not necessarily become a vaporeon, but not much was really known about the condition anyway.  He had been picked up and placed inside an enclosed bunk inside of a tuck and locked inside with a transparent panel.  The day went on without him doing anything other than watching the others, and then eating the 1 time he was given food through an automated process. He had just been examining himself when the lights were turned fully off, leaving him with nothing to do other than sleep.
Ben then got up in the middle of the night suddenly, he had been woken by a strange painful feeling from his new tail.  It looked the same as before from the outside, but it pulse
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TF infection story day 1 (draft)
Ben opened up the letter, pausing as his shirt passed over the spot of blue skin that had formed on his arm.  He ended up dropping the letter as the patch of skin stung from the contact.   He then picked the letter back up, this time moving slowly to avoid the same mistake.  
The letter was a notice stating that because he had become infected with “pokerus” he had to stay put and allow agents to take him to a special facility to prevent the spread of the condition.  After reading the expected letter he sighed, he did not want to go, but knew he did not have much choice, as he lived in a relatively populated area and was not in the best shape anyway.
The note also contained a short list of things about what is happening to him, but he only glanced at the points.  He worked with pokemon researchers, and had actually helped the study the condition.  This gave him a bit more knowledge about what was happening to him than most people would have, alt
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Team Falcon full vaporeon TF 2/n :iconbenthevaporeon:BenTheVaporeon 5 12
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Team Falcon full vaporeon TF 1/n intro/capture :iconbenthevaporeon:BenTheVaporeon 6 5
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team falcons enhanced pokemon list old verson
Team falcons enhanced pokemon list (incomplete):
Team falcon often modifies pokemon to make the stronger, live longer, and often be more able to process human like topics and act on their own.  This is mostly done with genetic modification, but other methods were sometimes used.  This was started before team falcon was officially formed by a legal corporation amid a ton of opposition, eventually leading to the government shutting down the projects, destroying the data, and killing the pokemon, and thus, team falcons violent creation.  Team falcon continued the projects after this to a much greater degree than before, as they no longer follow laws and seek to build a fighting force to maintain their goals
As pokemon (in my stories) are not solely made from static DNA, these modifications often had more changes then planed, and often alter the pokemon anatomy
Although enhanced pokemon are usually much smarter than base forms, it is often difficult to teach them “huma
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another second person story(short) (also TF)
A response to all of you that insist on forcing nebby to stay in a dark bag all the time, and to #nebbygetinthebag
“zzzzip”  
Nebby then flew off into the air above you, fleeing you bag again.
“GET BACK IN THE BAG NEBBY” you then scream as you reach into the air to grab him. You could not see anyone around, but still did not want to take chances.
Nebby then wiggled around in your hands trying to resist his containment.
“Come on Nebby it is not safe for you” you then say outload while still forcing Nebby into your bag.
There was then a bright flash as you overcame Nebby’s strength and started to move him to your bag.
Your hands then cramped and you were forced to make a fist thus releasing Nebby into the air again. Almost immediately after this, you become extremely lightheaded and the rest of your body started to glow as well.
Before you had much time to react, you whole body started shifting, and you were unable to move or even feel your
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mystery dungeon like RP (failed)
ok, i am going to attempt an RP idea i had...
although, i am not sure how it will go as it is more open then my others(meaning it does not have a planed story), but it will not require me to stick with the same story with others
it will have a sort of mystery dungeon style opening, but after that will be different
for this, you are limited to bipedal first evolutions and your partner has to be a pokemon with out arms or wings
this also takes place in my altered pokemon world, so there are RL animals and "magical" creatures(basicly, creatures with similar ability to pokemon for this)  
for the best effect, i should pick your pokemon and not tell you right away, but you can pick one if you want(you also get to name your partner)
i want to try and experiment with a syntax that will allow a long story to be constructed, but i was not planing on making this into a story as it has a very very VERY vage story line(aka... i make it up as i go) you can try and follow it, or you can chose t
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anthro vaporeon gills/neck fin 

80%
4 deviants said try and combine the functions of the fin and gills, like having the neck fin cover the gills when out of water ( (might) contradicts one newer pokedex entire but interesting idea that stays logical but does not remove features)
20%
1 deviant said try and put them both there(won't work well, but its an option)
0%
No deviants said remove the neck fin, and put gills there
0%
No deviants said move the gills to the main body, keep the visible fin (what i lean towards at this very moment)
0%
No deviants said be frog like instead of fish like(contradicts pokedex entries )
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No deviants said something else(comment)
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No deviants said just pick one your self("i have no idea" option)

how bad is it for a story to have similar events happen over and over with some variations,  for the current idea i have, i would probably have some elements unless i sped it up a ton ,

to align perfectly with the background, the story would have to span multiple years,  although that is basically impossible to pull off
the long term TF story i did before this had many changes per "step", and seemed to take about a week or less and was broken up into 4 separate files, and the TF infection story made the changes happen over 3 days.  both of those stories were limited in the fact that i did not give the character the ability to move around or do anything
this one will have them have some mobility, and be expected to do things during the change,  but i still can't think of up to a whole months worth of fully  unique events

i thought i could try and make them have a basic routine and alter it each time to adjust to changes, but this risks making the story relative and i don't want to make the entire story journal entry style  (dispute liking stories like that) as i think it would take away from details and descriptions of change procedures(this one won’t have changes come from within)  

(was interrupted in RL here, so sorry if I repeat anything)

this “routine” would probably be about a week of story time

 


also, does anyone else have any good ways for time compression


sense no one likes to comment, i have a multiple choice thing here
what do you think, are repetitive elements ok
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  • Listening to: fan
  • Reading: bulbapedia
  • Watching: boruto or naruto (out of pokemon to watch)
  • Playing: ultra moon,cold waters,or halo wars
  • Eating: stuff
  • Drinking: water

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... And todays max data is used up...(it does not cost more, but gets a lot slower)...


on a different note, i could get in trouble if i told someone on DA to kill themselves, right(no one that watches me, or that i watch, and not really any reasonable person, just a guy with a 2 week old account that does not seem to do anything but send notes saying "fuck you" to people)
on that note, right now i am not planing on reporting him because it was one note and a reply to ???, but i think he did say something that i could report him for, has this happened to any of you in the past days(if it has, i might report him, if not, i don't care enough)
Turns out i am not really disappearing for this week, the signal here is much better than last year, although i really can only get online from 2 physical spots, and not with my laptop(i am worried about tethering, as i know it says that data here counts as your normal data, but it does not directly talk about teathering, and my laptop can burn through a TON of data) only ever one dot though

Did have to try this twice... 3 times, maybe its not that much better than last time afterall
Just a heads up i will be gone for about a week starting tomorrow (should of been today) with little to no access to the internet, and won't have my laptop

Also i have been sick the past 2 day, so that is why i am passive
anthro vaporeon gills/neck fin
80%
4 deviants said try and combine the functions of the fin and gills, like having the neck fin cover the gills when out of water ( (might) contradicts one newer pokedex entire but interesting idea that stays logical but does not remove features)
20%
1 deviant said try and put them both there(won't work well, but its an option)
0%
No deviants said remove the neck fin, and put gills there
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No deviants said move the gills to the main body, keep the visible fin (what i lean towards at this very moment)
0%
No deviants said be frog like instead of fish like(contradicts pokedex entries )
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No deviants said something else(comment)
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No deviants said just pick one your self("i have no idea" option)
Is it bad to name your Palossand "port-a-fort"?
gills on anthros
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5 deviants said on the neck, it seems to be the correct way if you line up features with a fish
13%
1 deviant said below the arms, it seems common, and is a larger and safer area
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1 deviant said inline with lungs, possibly even sharing blood vessels (overlaps with #3, but more specific)
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1 deviant said it does not matter no one will be picky
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No deviants said anywere but the neck, its too weak(don't pick if one of the other choices fits better)
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No deviants said inside their lungs, or a separate internal organ
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No deviants said somewhere else
if i had a character that commonly mispronounced words in the story, should i intentionally misspell their talking lines,   or is that too confusing

the other idea i had would be to type the sentence, and then a separate like about what it sounded like 

any thoughts/ideas?
looks like long files won, should i try and put breaks in it and add page numbers like [1] in it so you can use control f to find a spot?
67%
2 deviants said yes, it will help if i can't finish in one sitting
33%
1 deviant said no, its pointless (although fine if you did)
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No deviants said no, that would be distracting in the story (would make the story worse)
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No deviants said it would be better to use a different format(what?)
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No deviants said it would be better to use something else, but i will keep what is better to myself
in long stories, what works better
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3 deviants said a small number or large files like i have done so far, as clicking through a bunch of files is time consuming and annoying
25%
1 deviant said a much large amount of short files, clicking through a bunch of pages is better then staying on the same file for 30-45min, and it helps keep things in place
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No deviants said honestly, i don't care about clicking thought, and don't have problems reading for 30 min strait
131 deviations

how bad is it for a story to have similar events happen over and over with some variations,  for the current idea i have, i would probably have some elements unless i sped it up a ton ,

to align perfectly with the background, the story would have to span multiple years,  although that is basically impossible to pull off
the long term TF story i did before this had many changes per "step", and seemed to take about a week or less and was broken up into 4 separate files, and the TF infection story made the changes happen over 3 days.  both of those stories were limited in the fact that i did not give the character the ability to move around or do anything
this one will have them have some mobility, and be expected to do things during the change,  but i still can't think of up to a whole months worth of fully  unique events

i thought i could try and make them have a basic routine and alter it each time to adjust to changes, but this risks making the story relative and i don't want to make the entire story journal entry style  (dispute liking stories like that) as i think it would take away from details and descriptions of change procedures(this one won’t have changes come from within)  

(was interrupted in RL here, so sorry if I repeat anything)

this “routine” would probably be about a week of story time

 


also, does anyone else have any good ways for time compression


sense no one likes to comment, i have a multiple choice thing here
what do you think, are repetitive elements ok
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  • Listening to: fan
  • Reading: bulbapedia
  • Watching: boruto or naruto (out of pokemon to watch)
  • Playing: ultra moon,cold waters,or halo wars
  • Eating: stuff
  • Drinking: water
(read journal first) repetitive events in stories
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2 deviants said it would deter me from continuing
50%
2 deviants said structures are ok, as that is often the way RL works anyway, as long as there is some clearly advancing element
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No deviants said its fine as long as its not copy/paste and has some variation
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No deviants said structures are ok, as that is often the way RL works anyway
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No deviants said other(comment)
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No deviants said other but i won't comment
well, that last poll was helpful, all of the spots got the same votes
for an idea i have(comment if you want explanations on good/bads for this idea)
33%
1 deviant said first person(also limits what they know based on senses)
33%
1 deviant said third person bound to one character(easier to type, but would leave some odd points)
33%
1 deviant said general third person (to show multiple charterers, although it will make some parts hard)
i seem to ask this every time i have a potential idea that i was going to work with, but does anyone have names or Pokemon they would want me to try and use,  this story idea is less restrictive then the Tf infection story, as i am planing on making all the characters complete anthros or full Pokemon

this time i am also not saying the choices are supposed to look random, as that was a limitation of the last one

still no legendarilies though, as this takes place in a lab, so only pokemon that can reproduce or replicate them (Magnemite is fine, just not pokemon who can only have one of them),  

and i already have an intro i can alter for this one, so that is one MAJOR step out of the way
if a story had elements that should not really be on DA, and i posted a link to segments off this site, would it (note, the majorty of the story would be safe for DA, although its dark)
75%
3 deviants said it would be fine
25%
1 deviant said doom the story, meaning you if you can't get the same theme without certain events then you should drop the idea
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No deviants said be confusing, but not enough to destroy the story provided you put some filler stuff in it, and just use "i don't want to relive/explain it" from the characters pov
if i have an intro section that is not attached to a story yet, should i:
67%
2 deviants said wait to put it into a story
33%
1 deviant said post the fragment and then hope i can use it for something later
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No deviants said no clue, but aren't intros your weak spot?
do dark themes in stories discorage you from reading them
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3 deviants said they actually make me more likely to continue with them
33%
2 deviants said no
17%
1 deviant said yes
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No deviants said i seem to be unable to stick with a single story idea in my head long enough to make something out of it(click to see results)
... Century link's internet has problems every yeae, without exception...

So yea, the internet here does not work now(i am not at normal home), i can teather from my phone to my computer, or just use my phone directly(i have enough data), but only have one extra power outlet, so i am limmited to about 30 min of being online with my laptop untill
My phones battery is dead,

If there are any typeos here, this is what happens when i type long things out from my phone

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Thank you very much for faving my art! I will upload a colorized version of this drawing after the DEJ3-Challenge, in case you are interested :) (Smile)
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Your welcome

Color does not mean that much to me for a pick like this, but i will probably see it when the other one is done
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Thank you for the fav my dear ~ <3
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your welcome
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Thank you For the Faves I really appreciate it You are welcome to visit me anytime!
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Thanks for the fav! Check out the rest of my gallery if you'd like. :meow:
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